Creative Writing

There was snow that has fallen on the pine tree.Beside the pine forest there was a beautiful blue lake beside that there was a steep mountain range. Snowy trees beside the shore of the lake."Wow" gazed Tommy and his dad.

Tommy and his Dad,Dave were hiking though the wild to camo out in lake apple. Tommy and His dad were from the city so they were wowed by the view.Tommy was a wimpy smelly kid.His dad was strong and tall and smells like donuts from Joe's donuts.                    

 They set up camp at the lake shore.Later that night they were going to have dinner but they noticed there  was no food in there pack's."DAD THERE IS NO FOOD IN OUR PACKS" Tommy yelled." WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FOOD THEN?" he shouted back.